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i didn't mean to
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my hair is dripping so wet
matching the sad brown in my eyes
the water was so deep
the blue now tinged an eerie color
i didn't mean to do it
It happened so quick, in a second
then it was all over
and the lights dimmed
as if in mourning of what was
matching the sad brown in my eyes
the water was so deep
the blue now tinged an eerie color
i didn't mean to do it
It happened so quick, in a second
then it was all over
and the lights dimmed
as if in mourning of what was
nothing to say just random poem...
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For such a short little poem, you've crammed in an awful lot of imagery. I particularly like the last two lines - it's very vivid and an image I've not come across before. Short, but beautiful.